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Re: A New Hope opening crawl challenge!

from the imperial perspective-

It is the best of times, it is the worst of times.
The rebellion has festered into a widespread confilct, and the fate of star systems hangs in the balance. This spread of dis-order must be contained, and the empire has reponded.
The rebels have stolen some of the empires secret information through trechery and deceit.
And this action has led to the empire tightening its fist around every star-system the Rebels can be found in.
It is only a matter of time now until the Rebellion is on its knees before the Emperor, and the strength of the Empire only grows now...

"The victorious win the battle, then go out to fight ... while the defeated go out to fight, then try to win the battle.   -SunTzu
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Re: A New Hope opening crawl challenge!

Sounds good Bandu :]

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Re: A New Hope opening crawl challenge!

"It's a time of galactic turmoil, insidious rebels contrary to EMPEROR PALPATINE's declaration of new order have struck cowardly against members of the IMPERIAL NAVY.

In midst of the ensuing chaos, rebel spies managed to steal technical data from the empire greatest technological asset, and tool to restore the order to the galaxy, the DEATH STAR, commanded by one of the empire's greatest tactical minds, Grand moff WILHUFF TARKIN.

But such victory will be short lived, as the Imperator class Star Destroyer DEVASTATOR, located the plans aboard the alderaanian ship Tantive IV, which carries the Princess LEIA ORGANA, traitor to the empire and known rebel agent. It is only a matter of time before these rebels are captured and order is restored throughout the galaxy."

It became quite long, but Imperial propaganda is known to make up facts and camouflage things.

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Re: A New Hope opening crawl challenge!

He already put the video together with the final text...

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Re: A New Hope opening crawl challenge!

Meh, that doesnt stops me from exerting my creativity does it?
not at least a "omg, it sucked?"