Re: FS Fan Fic Inspiration Samples
Now it's time for another slice of Mos Espa action to inspire your writing over this handy Easter Holiday weekend.
As an added bonus this chapter introduces that most elite of Rebel fighting units, the Rogue Tribe.
Mos Espa
First Strike: Episode 2
At 07:50hrs I arrive at the Vigilance's main ventral loading hatch, my men are just finishing up the transfer of our kit onto the Venture. My trusty R2 unit Artee, short for R2 T3, waits patiently on a replusor platform as the final item of cargo to be lowered down the cylindrical transfer tube down into the Venture. I look to Lt. Walker who after a final check of the datapad passes it over for me to inspect.
"All crew and kit presently accounted for Commander, all locked down and ready for departure."
I give the datpad a glance; everything looks in order, as always, I couldn't ask for a more efficient second.
"Good work Jim. I have the feeling we're going to need all the luck, and firepower we can muster on this one."
Lt. Walker then places a hand on my shoulder.
"You've always pulled us through before sir. Besides, if you screw this up really badly I guess that'd mean an early promotion for me, the way I see it either way it's a win win situation."
I make like I'm going to gut punch the guy, but he's already hopped over to the hatch and is sliding down the shaft's ladder. Heh, thinks he's witty, wonder how witty he'll be feeling when I get him cleaning the barrack latrines when we get back with a vibro toothbrush. I crack a smile which is what he was after, and then slide down the ladder myself into our ship as a crewman closes the hatch behind us.
Once on deck I head for the main hold, stroking the wall of the cylindrical corridor as I go. The Rogue's Venture was an old Corellian YT1300, a nondescript average looking space freighter, which was just ideal for our needs. With the Corellian shipbuilding mindset of too much power being far better than not enough, this vessel's central power plant far exceeds the specifications required to run a ship of this type, and therefore has plenty of extra juice to run upgrades, like the pair of military grade twin laser cannons we have mounted on her, or the advanced jamming and sensor suite we've installed, or the souped up engines that far exceed the manufacturer's specifications. The thing is to look at her, who would know? There is also the fact that when we first came across this ship we used her to get out of one of the stickier situations that we'd found ourselves in over Nar Shadda, and we all got out of there alive, and after an experience like that is it any wonder that we all feel rather attached to the old girl?
I pass into the main hold and see my crew all strapped in and ready to go all decked out in light weight sand coloured combat gear. With a dozen men we're a small unit, but that suits our style of hit and fade well. I cheerfully nod to my men.
"Doing okay lads?"
To which the eldest of my troops Sergeant Rabid replies.
"Just tribal sir, isn't that right boys?"
The crew respond in unison.
"Totally Tribal Sir!"
Smiling I reply.
"Good, good. Make sure you've got all your gear stowed, we'll be hitting Hyperspace as soon as we're clear of the fleet."
The Rogue Tribe is how my unit came to be known across the Alliance, a unit with no attachment to any particular fleet, stationed where ever our particular skill set is needed the most by Alliance Command. I follow the corridor round the bend until I find myself in the cockpit. Before me Lieutenants Walker and Twigs are just making the final preparations for take off. I hand a datapad to the navigator sat behind them, a young Ensign assigned to us by the fleet to fill out our flight crew.
"Morning gentlemen. Ensign, plot a course using these co-ordinates if you please."
Lt. Twigs quickly glances over the Ensign's shoulder at the datapad's screen.
"Tatooine, Commander? What could we possibly want with that dust ball? Don't forget we're still not exactly popular with the Hutts after that little incident on Nar Shadda. Do we really want to be headed into Hutt space again so soon?"
I take my seat as Walker warms up the engines in readiness for take off.
"It's not like we have a choice, we have our orders. Besides, Tatooine is hardly Hutt space, sure they have a presence there, but we'll be fine. This will be a low profile insertion, a quick in and out operation."
Twigs laughs humourlessly.
"Ha, where have I heard that before?"
He takes his seat and activates the last of the ships systems, he reaches up and flips a lever and the dull thud of docking clamps can be heard releasing above and we drift free of the Vigilance, firing manoeuvring thrusters Twigs pulls us away and the grey bulk of the Rebel cruiser passes away above us. Once clear he guns the sublight engines and we rocket away through the rag tag fleet of Nebulon-Bs, Corvettes and Transports. We're going to need heavier guns than these if we're ever going to win this war. We clear the edge of the fleet and enter clear space. I glance at the ensign who nods back an affirmative regarding the programming of the coordinates for Tatooine into the navi-computer.
"Okay Lieutenant you're clear for the jump to hyperspace. Punch it!"
Twigs pushes forward on a throttle on the panel before him and the stars ahead stretch into piercing needles of light and then we are catapulted forth into bluey green maelstrom of hyperspace.
Once secure I unstrap myself from the chair and retrieve my datapad from the Ensign.
"Alright, set her on autopilot guys, it's time for me to brief you on this mission."
Strolling into the main hold I find the lads all in various states of relaxation, some clean their weapons, others pass the time with holographic chess, but when I arrive on deck it is all business again. They stand to attention, and I gesture for them to stand or sit at ease, and walk over to the engineering console and lean against it as I commence the mission briefing.
"At ease lads. I'm going to bring you up to speed on where we're headed, and what we're going to need to do when we get there. Alliance Intelligence has picked up a distress call from one of its operatives on Tatooine. The agent was on route to our fleet when he found himself compromised and felt the need to dump the package in accordance with emergency protocols to prevent any sensitive materials falling into enemy hands. Now these agents never do this lightly, so take it as a given that we're going to get contact when we get there. We've already received reports from analysts listening in on Imperial military com chatter that our agent was indeed apprehended by a Bounty Hunter, and that they have already dispatched forces to retrieve the prisoner. As such our window of opportunity is slim. Ideally we want to look at getting planet side, retrieve the package and get out of there before the Empire arrives. Either way, we'll be going in light, but heavy, that's no mechanised support, but equipped to take on anything they can throw at us. "
Private Athlon raises his hand to ask a question and I nod to acknowledge him, but continue.
"… And before you ask. Yes the Empire does have a garrison stationed in the world's capital city of Bestine, but the Governor in office there is known to be corrupt and is in ill favour within the Empire, most likely the reason for his posting so far out in the Outer Rim. It is likely that Imperial High Command will bring in forces from off world rather than entrust such a potentially important mission to the locals. Their nearest fleet is stationed further away than us, so that gives us a slight advantage."
Athlon's hand goes up again. This time I allow him to speak.
"That's all very enlightening Commander, but I was going to ask if there was any truth to the rumours concerning the package? Co-ordinates that lead to the new Rebel Base, and instructions to be sure to pack your thermal underwear, so I've heard sir."
I chuckle to myself, before putting on my serious face to reply.
"Now Private you know I can't comment as that information is classified."
I allow the laughter to subside before I continue.
"What I can tell you is that we'll be hitting dirt in the town of Anchorhead, there is a small Rebel cell operating out of there under the guise of local militia. They'll be providing us with speeders to transport us to our final destination. Lt. Walker will be in charge of the tracking equipment we'll be using to zero in on the package.”
Another question comes in cautiously from Private Darac Tuhl.
“Commander, you say we are to pick up the package, but I’ve heard no mention of our intentions regarding the agent. I gather this isn’t a rescue mission then?”
I lower my eyes, and then look up and shake my head solemnly.
“I’m afraid not Private, even if we knew where the agent was being held, which we don’t, our priority is the intelligence package. It must not fall into enemy hands. I don’t like it, but the agent knew the risks, he had his mission, and now we have ours. That is all lads, now go get some rest. We're going to have a busy day."

