1 (edited by Athlon 2009-04-16 16:44:45)

Topic: Mos Espa Prologue

Still a work in progress at the moment, any feedback, both positive and negative, is welcomed. smile

Blue swirling wisps of the hyper drive tunnel which enveloped  the body of the ship finally gave way to a myriad of of horizontal white lines, rapidly shortening to the white dots of the stars that formed them. A small brown speck now grew in the centre of the ships bridge window, growing in size until it completely filled the view from it. Blurred rich yellows and burnt golds gave way to to sharper outlines and geological features of the planet that now confronted the ship.

High above the desert planet the Imperial Star Destroyer "Allegiance" engages its ion engines and silently slips into stationary orbit. Tatooine now lays below, brightly lit and bleached by its twin suns, making the world a most inhospitable place to survive even for the most hardiest of creatures. Almost immediately, and with a sense of urgency, two craft emerge from the ships main hanger, a single Lambda shuttle slowly unfolds its main flight wings and proceeds to the planets surface closely followed by a modified cargo carrying Sentinel class lander. Both follow the same approach before the Sentinel peels away for a different destination on the surface below.

Athlon Antillies had arrived on Tatooine fourteen months earlier. Dispatched from the ISD "Devastator" as a member of the Imperial sand trooper unit "Desert Sands" Zeta Squadron. Its mission, under the leadership of Captain Mod Terrik, was to recover secret plans thought to have been jettisoned in an escape pod from a captured Rebel blockade runner. Following the search, and subsequent loss, of the two droids thought to be carrying the data, Desert Sands had remained on Tatooine. Its mission, given directly by Lord Vader himself, had been to begin the pacification campaign of Tatooine's citizens and the search, and extermination, of any Rebel cells along with anyone foolish enough to harbour them.

He now stood in the garrisons small briefing room at Mos Eisley as Lieutenant Zander rose from his desk.
"You've been assigned to Lieutenant Walker from the ISD Allegiance to help with a covert extraction mission over at Espa. They need someone who has a working knowledge of the area and can speak Huttese".
After fourteen months of leading various search and destroy missions at Mos Eisley and the surrounding settlements of Anchorhead and Bestine Athlon had become quite fluent in Huttese, the native language of many of Tatooine's inhabitants.
"Espa sir?" Athlon replied, he knew the small town well from previous missions "Its a pretty quiet settlement compared to many on Tatooine, what or who could possibly be of interest to high command there that would warrant the deployment of an ISD?" 
"That's really non of my, or your, concern trooper! Get yourself down to docking bay 25 ASAP, Lieutenant Walker will meet you their for a full briefing, Dismissed!"

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Re: Mos Espa Prologue

You're not continuing the story? I know you don't have to but the rebels were going in action!

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Re: Mos Espa Prologue

Athlon wrote:

Still a work in progress at the moment


Its looking good, eager for the next bit tongue

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4 (edited by Athlon 2009-04-17 12:27:06)

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The streets of MosEisley bustled with activity as Athlon hurried towards the docking bay. The drone of voices and the heady aroma of spices and foods from the many market stalls that lined the street filled the air. All the time he'd been posted here he'd never liked the place. He'd been raised on Corellia a lush, green agricultural world far removed from the dusty, arid, planet he now inhabited. Drafted into the Imperial army at seventeen, as was the requirement of all Corellians, he'd served his two year term and had made the decision to stay on rather than to return home and make a living on the family farm. That had been ten years ago and although he missed the beauty of his home world, being posted to Tatooine only made him think more of it, he had no intention of returning.

The city lacked a main space port and instead relied on 362 individual hangers to server its needs. Thankfully Docking bay 25 was only a short distance from the main garrison and within a few minutes Athlon was punching in the Imperial master code, which unlocked all the city's hangers, and stepped through the now open doorway.

The shade within the edge of circular building gave a welcome respite to the midday twin suns glare. Through the gloom Athlon could make out the Lambda shuttle, wings folded, boarding ramp open sitting in the centre of the hanger. Plumes of white gas billowed down from the shuttles exhausts and open landing gear, the entire ship creaking and groaning as it struggled to adjusted to the searing heat, far removed from the icy coldness of space it had come from only minutes before. The lone figure of an Imperial stormtrooper stood next to the open ramp, the orange pauldron on his left shoulder indicated to Athlon that this must be Lieutenant Walker.
"Sandtrooper Athlon Antillies Reporting for dut.." Athlon began before being cut dead by the officer.
"No time for that Trooper!, get yourself on board, you'll be briefed on the mission en route"

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5 (edited by FSDev| TALON 2009-04-17 04:57:22)

Re: Mos Espa Prologue

Looking forward to reading the rest of this, though if your Imperial Rogue Tribe meet my Rebel Rogue Tribe in battle over Mos Espa that could result in a bit of a Mindfrakk.

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6 (edited by Athlon 2009-04-17 12:42:55)

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He had barely reached the boarding ramp before the shuttles repulsor engines burst into life, and only just managed to clamber into the small hold as the craft slowly lifted into the air in a corkscrew motion unfolding its wings as it cleared the hanger and entered the clear blue sky above.
"Get us out of here", Walker barked to the pilot as he took his seat, and with a sudden flare from the shuttles main drive engine they had cleared the city below and were heading out at low altitude over the Great Mesra Plateau, heading north west, towards their destination of MosEspa.
Taking his seat Athlon studied the Stormtroopers he had now joined within the shuttle, sitting opposite him, and couldn't help notice their appearance. On the whole most Stormtroopers deployed by ISD's to Tatooine arrived fresh with gleaming armour and a naive innocence. These troopers where different, battle hardened with worn, blaster marked armour. Whoever or whatever ever was to be extracted from MosEspa must be of a high importance to the empire to deploy a squad like this Athlon thought to himself.

Lieutenant Walker hauled himself to his feet and deployed the holo projector at the front of the small ships cabin. Athlon instantly recognised the aerial plan of Mos Espa. Clearing his throat he began to address the awaiting troops.
"Listen up people" he paused looking to ensure he had everyone's attention "A Rebel courier has been tracked down and captured in the small town of MosEspa by a bounty hunter working on behalf of the empire. It is believed by high command that this agent was carrying vital information on the whereabouts of a new hidden Rebel base. Our mission is to secure the prisoner and extract him to the Allegiance for interrogation" He paused again, turning towards the map screen behind him. "It is also believed that the Courier has secreted the information he was carrying somewhere within the town prior to his capture. With the help of Trooper Antillies" He nodded in Athlon's direction "And his working knowledge of the people and area, we are to retrieve the missing data before it falls back into the hands of the Alliance"

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