Now that you mention it, there are a couple small issues there too... I'm just gonna highlight my added suggestions in green, stuff to take out in red.

Battle of Taloraan
With the war raging on throughout the galaxy, <(comma) both sides have started to run low on many critical supplies. High on the list of needed war materials is Tibanna gas, a critical substance used in the construction and operation of most blaster weapons.  Desperate to refill their stockpiles, both the Alliance and the Empire have dispatched convoys to the planet of Taloraan to collect the vital gas.  En route these small fleets have encountered one another and now both sides have engaged in a pitched battle to ensure that the other side's supply of tibanna gas is disrupted.

Encounter at Mos Entha
Following fierce fighting in Mos Espa, the pathetic Rebel band has been forced to retreat to the nearby town of Mos Entha by the superior fighting forces of the Empire. Rallying our troops we will finally take them under the cover of night. The Imperial war cruiser, Allegiance, in orbit has shot down a Rebel Blockade Runner resulting in the vessel crash landing in the centre|center of town. The Rebel scum’s hopes of escape have just gone up in flames. New reports from the Allegiance indicate that Rebel space forces have entered the system and that she has just engaged the enemy. The time has come for us to do the same here on the ground. For the Empire!

Endor Clearing
Rebel Commander: “One of our transports has gone down on the forest moon. An Imperial recon force has been deployed to the crash site. You will be deployed just north of the site, secure any survivors and defeat the Imperial presence. May the Force be with you.”                                             Imperial Ground Commander: “While our fleet is engaging the Rebels in space, we have detected a transport crashing on this moon. Stormtroopers, we have no need for prisoners. You have your orders, move out!”                                   16p – 3 flags all cappable                                      32p – 5 flags all cappable                                         

Doesn't belong in the official localization text, please remove.

Endor Strike Team
With the battle for Endor raging above, the fight for the shield generator has taken a turn for the worse. Faced with a legion of crack stormtroopers guarding the shield generator, the Alliance had dispatched more groundtroops in an attempt to secure the ground and buy time for the bunker to be destroyed. It is now a race against the clock for the Alliance to eliminate the entire Imperial presence on the forest moon of Endor before the fleet above is annihilated.

Escape from Hoth
After the Battle of Hoth, and the subsequent evacuation of the Rebel Alliance stronghold| ,Echo|, Echo Base, the last group of Rebel Gallofree Transports heads for space. Unfortunately the Imperial Star Destroyer Vindicator lies in their path, between them and clear space free of Hoth’s gravity well that will allow them to make the jump to hyperspace. Luckily the base’s Ion Cannon crew set the weapon to auto fire at any enemy vessels that close into range. The resulting blast has temporarily crippled the mighty Imperial war cruiser. However the Transports and their escort wing of Rebel Starfighters must still deal with the crippled ship’s compliment of TIE Fighters and Bombers before they can make good their escape.

Tatooine MosEspa
Alliance Intelligence has picked up a distress call from one of it’s operatives on Tatooine. He suspects that a Bounty Hunter is on his trail. This operative was on his way back to central command carrying vital information for the Alliance, the jump co-ordinates|coordinates that lead to the newly established base on Hoth. Fearing capture, he has hidden the data module in the sleepy town of Mos Espa. Intercepted Imperial communications indicate that the operative was indeed captured, and the Bounty Hunter has contacted Imperial forces who are now on their way to Tatooine to collect the prisoner. A Rebel Strike Team has been dispatched to secure the town, and retrieve that intel before the Empire discovers it’s location!

What is the endor clearing.

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